Dear Reader, There once was a young teenage girl walking through the streets, she had just came from hanging out with her friends. It was late at night the moon had already come out and the cars were on there way home. All the lights from the homes were out, and all you could see was the blue lighting from their TV screens. As the young girl approached to the corner of her house she seen a green light, she wondered and walked towards it when she turned it over she saw it was a phone. She took it and walked home, then went straight into her room.
The girl had never seen that type of bran of a phone the bran said iphonous... It was similar to what she had an iphone, but it was very different. She looked at it and pressed the extended ear, and when she clicked that a ear popped out of the screen of the phone. She didn’t know what it was for until she poked the ear, and out came a strange voice a language she has never heard before. It sounded like a voice mail because after the strange languages it gave a phone number. Then she clicked on the app that said wizard chess, which sounded like chess then the game took her inside the phone so she can play herself the game.
This phone in a way was very different nothing like the iphone she had. This phone actually took her into the world she clicked in, or the app she choose. The girl was very terrified because she never experienced with these types of phones. So she decided the best thing was to take it back, she didn’t want to see the phone because she was too scared to try any other apps. So the next morning the young teenage girl put the phone back and walked to school. When the girl walked home she seen it was gone, she wondered who took it but she was glad it was gone!
Dear writer I like the way how you made a comparison on how it would look like an Iphone but much different from when turning it on. Also on how it has a much different reaction than a regular phone and how it is unique -Victor Figueroa
I really like your post because so apps do cause teems to lose their mind. their are some type of phones out their that aren't all that good like people say they are. Tashianna Cannon A/B 3
Dear Writer, I admire the way you have writen your story. It has a good description of what the charcter in your story does and what she thinks. I also have to admire how you gave details on the scene and story.
I was on my way to school with some friends when from afar I saw something glistening on the ground. I thought it was just glass, so I didn’t really pay much attention to it. I asked my friend if he could see what it actually was, but he said he didn’t know. We walked a few more steps and I could now see what it actually was. It was an Iphonus. These are really expensive phones, and hard to find at a cheap price. Who could have possibly dropped an Iphonus?
I asked my friends what they thought I should do with the phone. They said I should obviously keep it. I thought it would be wrong for me to keep the phone because if I were to lose my phone, I’d expect for the one who found it to return it. But, I just decided to keep it. I went through the phone like for an hour straight. It had many cool and fun apps to play and use.
I went on one of the apps and I started messing around with it. I saw that the names of the apps were familiar. Like from a movie of some sort. And then it hit me, they were names from spells in the Harry Potter series. But, why would they have these apps in their phones? Can it be that this is Harry Potter’s phone? I feel lucky to have found this phone. Before this, I had a really old flip phone, that was so embarrassing to pull out when I had to call someone
Dear reader if i ever had the iphonus what u would do with it is sell it,and if i sold it i would make a lot of money because it has all these kinds of apps.These apps are mostly magical because they are mostly about magic.The phone will be worth 100,000,000,000,000 Dollars.It would be worth alot because the iphonus is not just a regular phone,or a smart phone or any kind of phone,but it is a magical phone.
I would advertise the phone by making a fun commercial. Since the phone would be pretty big, i would need to have some kind of celebrity advertise it in a way people would be interested in. Also, i would have it with me all the time that way it wouldn’t be stolen from me and have to live without my money.If a person buys the iphonus they will first go to the wizard chess.The game the wizard chess would be more of a fun game to play because the chess will become real and they would be in the game.
If the buyer wants to bargain for it for a lower price. I would say no because the Iphonus would be too special to be sold for a lower price. The phone,Which is black, will have a case the it fits any phone if placed on. The phone will have a personal friend that you will be able to talk to. It is a creature that can teleport through black smoke ,and be able to help you in a late situation. This creature will surely never disobey you because the phone has a button that you can press so it would not get out of control,so not only the phone will be great it would be useful,helpful,and fun to play with.
I agree with your representation of the iPhonus and its price. The reason why is because the iPhonus is very precious, and it must be sold to whoever desperately needs it. Since the phone is very magical and would require someone with good care to handle the phone, since it may be dangerous as well. I like your idea of the advert and the game the owner would play because that would be appealing as well.
Although that is a lot of money you are asking for, I strongly agree with it being very worthy. It has many apps that are very magical. No other device is magical which makes this one special. -Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
The rules that the school would have is to download any apps that you need for school if it was for textbook or to communicate with the teacher. In order to have a iPhonus you would have to be in a magic school because only witches and wizards have the power to control an iPhonus. If not enroll to a magic school you would have to take a test and see if you would be taken in. If you are not a wizard or a witch then the child that want to learn magic would need to talk to the principal and say they wanted to enrol.
If you plan on getting and iPhonus you have to take it to each class because teacher would check if you have the right materials. If you do not have it then the teachers would count you as you where absent because you do not have your materials. Also when you are in that class in the school year they would tell you to delete the apps and only keep the ones that are not school related. When they come back from break they would tell you what you need to download on your iPhonus. If you had a problem over break or in school they would tell you to bring it into the main office to get a replaceable one until yours is fixs. If you do not follow the rules then they would take away and give it to you till the end of class.
If the teacher gets your iPhonus they would provide you with a textbook and give it to you at the end of class so you would do it again. Also, if you continue on to do it then they will tell you do not ever bring it their class if they do they should not turn it on. The student would have to buy a textbook for that class in order to continue their studies throughout that class period. If none of these rules are followed in the school they would get put into a different school. That school does not have an iPhonus and the school that would makes you buy all the textbook and materials you need. Some materials will be provide and some will not be provide by the school. -Kassandra E. Munoz A2/B2
I like the way that you describe what the apps do. Also I really liked the story because we could use these apps everyday instead of doing it ourselves -Jacqueline Romero A3
If I had this iphoneus for one day I would be extremely lost and curious. Lost because I wouldn't know what each of the apps mean, what they can do, and who the owner was. Curious because it has all these unusual apps like hallows, love potion, and wizard chess. Now, I’m really curious on what the phone would do if I clicked on one of the apps. Do you think it would kill me, turn me into a monster, or explode? Lets find out because who knows what this phone can lead to. I invited my friend Alexi over so we can discover this new iphoneus together. The first app we clicked was Felix Felicis. Felix Felicis means “Liquid Luck” and we definitely needed that for our few months of freshman year because we need to go to sophomore year. It was weird making the potion for it because you needed honey,rose petal,clover ( 3 leaf or 4 doesn't matter), basil,stir 3 times, then let sit for 3 minutes then it is done. And your potion will be ready, so we waited for that amount of time till it was complete. I WAS AMAZED! We checked our powerschool and notice we were at a 4.0 Gpa. We even got accepted to go to a certain college for ROTC for a week. Now, the problem is what will happen when the phone is gone? Will we be at the bottom line? Will we make it in fitness? Those things worried me. So, I decided to write down the ingredients just incase without bothering to look at the side effects of what could happen if you used it too much. Mariah Martinez Ms.Wright Period A/B2
I would also be curios because I do not know what each app does or what will happen. I also liked how you said that it Felix Felicis means "Liquid Luck" I wish we had that kind of thing it would be amazing. Kassandra Munoz A2/B2
If I were to be in the same setting as the iPhonus, out of all the apps that can be chosen I would choose to keep TimeTurn. The reason for this is because this app looks the most intriguing to me. Since I can guess that the TimeTurn app probably changes or alters time in some way. Which is why this app would be the most helpful for anyone and myself including because of its time abilities it holds. The time can be changed at any moment to go backward or forward at any setting for myself. The apps, along with TimeTurn, I would also keep would be Expandable Ear because of the ability to expand someone's hearing aid and then they can hear far distances. Which is why the Expandable Ear would be very handy in any case for myself. For example, If I have to hear a conversation or a secret being told that is somewhat a long distance away.Then I would help others with things they need or things that must be done with the new found apps I have on iPhonus to to aid me. The TimeTurn can help me change time while the Expandable Ear can provide me with new information faster in the end. That is why in most cases these two will come hand in hand to provide faster and easier solutions to problems I may have. In school, home, outside, shopping; any setting will give these two apps meaning to their uses. These solutions, however, might not always be the best; they can only sometimes help when I have them, which is why I will make sure not to lose the iPhonus. The Expandable Ear and the TimeTurn will only aid to a certain degree, although, that is why I must use the apps carefully. In conclusion the two apps I would choose would be TimeTurn and Expandable Ear for their very helpful abilities.
I really liked your writing! I liked how you explained all of the things the app would be able to do. I also liked how you added the things you would do with these apps. -Vanessa Arellano A3/B3
I definitely agree with your choices I would keep the TimeTurn app because it would most likely do something that would help me with time situations. Also i agree withe the Extendable Ear app because it would be awesome to hear things from a far distance.
I like how you included a lot of detail which makes your response strong. The apps seem very useful to me as well. I would also agree with you having to be careful with the phone especially since your not that very familiar with the apps. -Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
How much would you sell the iPhonus for if you had it? How would you advertise it? If I had the iPhonus for sale, I would sell it for what it’s worth, maybe about $200-$290. I would sell it for this amount because besides being very similar to an iPhone, it also has magical powers, so people can cast spells on others and feel like a real wizard!
In advertisements, I would tell people that if they got the iPhonus, their lives would be easier and more exciting! Billboards everywhere would say “Feel like a wizard!” or “Cast a spell today! Only with the iPhonus!” People would be lining up outside ATT’s doors. Anybody who is somebody will have the iPhonus.
People will say “I don’t have any money; nevertheless, I’m getting a payment plan for the iPhonus!” Contests would be held about the books and movies of Harry Potter and whoever knew the most would win the phone. Everyone and their grandmother would have an iPhonus! Damaris Carrasco P2
I like how you said that their is a contest that you can win and iPhonus by entering a contest. I like how you said that the one that enters more ballets would get the iPhonus. -Kassandra Munoz A2/B2
Jimmy was walking when he saw a nice looking phone on the floor, so he picked it up and he went home with it right away. when he got home he didn't know what to do with it, so he decided to turn it on and he noticed that this wasnt no ordinary phone because he saw apps that he never seen or heard of, so he decided to use the blue reparo app so that he could fix the tires on his ferrari because they were losing their grip.
The other apps that i see on this phone are really cool because i think the blue timeturn app could really be cool and really helpful if you might want to go back in time and fix something that you felt was wrong. If i had this phone for one day i would lose my mind and do anything i want because of the time turn app, this app could allow me to go back in time and fix what ever i had done. this phone is kind of similar to harry potter because he has wizard powers and they are mostly like the ones on the phone. if i got to keep an app i would keep the time turn because i could basically do what i want and not get caught.
My life would be way different if i had this phone because its a really powerful thing to have and you could basically do what ever you want. i would sell this phone for a billion dollars because its worth lots of money and its really powerful. a school rule would be to not use in school because it would really be crazy because the phone is so powerful. my question for this phone is can it break? i say no because the phone is so powerful i don't think it would break.-Brandon Camarillo
I agree that this phone is really powerful. I also agree with the fact that you can use the time turn app to do whatever you want and not get caught, just imagining of the things I would do is truly amazing. Johann Garcia P3 Ms. Wright
It was her fifteenth birthday. The moment where she becomes a young adult was finally here. She had her mother invite family and friends all the way to her little village just so they can sing to her. It was a crazy morning, people from all over the village knew that it was the girls birthday because it was so small. She had her mother and father cook her meals, but the day still wasn’t perfect. The girl was raised to be a brat. She got everything she wanted and didn’t have to work for anyone. She would rather go out and play in the mud, then go to school to take a math test. She was always finding something new, and everyone would think she is amazing and a smart young lady. The thing is, she wasn’t girly. She would fight her mother just to wear pants. The girls mother gave her everything and set up the party. Everyone was at their house just for her, but the girl thought her day still wasn’t perfect. The girl then ran off to this forest where she would go sit and think about her life, and what it means to live with such a person like her. As she was running she stumbled upon this phone. It wasn’t a regular phone either, not like the one her mother had and not like the one she had. She noticed that it said “I” but she didn’t she the phone part, like it said on her phone. It said “Iphonus” She wondered if she should just leave it because someone was probably looking for it, or if this was a great opportunity to explore. The girl picked up the phone and pressed the Extendable Ear. She noticed that the phone took some time because it said that it was trying to get to know her. She wondered if someone was trying to play a trick on her, or if this was the real thing. Then she noticed that she could her her mother all the way from the forest. When the girl opened her camera on her Iphone she saw that her ear was really big. She was scared, yet interested in the fact that this is real. She ran home and keep the phone. Alexi De Jesus A/B2
Your story was really fun to read. It makes me want to read more of the girl and the phone. You had great grammar. I like how you made the girl seem non girly. I wonder, why didn't the girl think her day was still not perfect Still, you did a good job with this story.
I like many of the things in your story, such as the third person perspective and the girl's personality. I also like how you express how she felt about the iPhonus and how she used it.
What would you do with this phone if you had it for one day?
I would do tons of things with it. The first one being trying to figure it out and knowing how to navigate the phone. I don’t think it would be that hard to use it; besides, it kind of seems like an iPhone. I would go through the phone to see what kinds of things it does. It would be kind of interesting trying to see what the phone does, considering I know nothing about Harry Potter.
After I learned how to use it, I would try to figure out what all of the apps do. It would be really fun but dangerous trying to figure out what the apps do. Overall, I think it would be a great experience because I would learn about things that maybe Harry Potter fans know. It would be pretty awesome knowing what magical power each app comes with.
However, if I don’t figure out how to use the iPhonus, things would get pretty ugly. Because I wouldn’t know how to use the phone, beams of light would be shooting everywhere. Magic would be getting all over the place. If I don’t figure out how to use the phone, people would be getting hit with the love potion spell. If I did find the iPhonus, things could go bad or good.
I like the fact that you added different aspects of having the phone and having to learn to use the phone. The other thing i liked was how you mentioned the ups and downs of having the magical phone.
I like how you said that you wouldn't be able to know how it works and that it would be dangerous cause you don't know how to use it. Also I like how you explained the bad part of having the phone.
I like how you added imagination to your answer. It made the phone sound really fun with all the powers each app will have. Also I like how you added both the positive and negative things that would happen if you got the phone.
I like how you show how you used your iPhonus and how you found out how dangerous the phone really is. I also pointed out how dangerous the iPhonus is, but it was for schools and not everyday life.
It was a normal day for Jack until he found something unusual on the floor on him way home from school. From the looks of it he thought it was an iPhone or an apple product. It didn't have a password, so he was able to get into the phone without struggle. When he slid his finger to unlock the phone he was surprised with what he saw on the phone. They were apps, but not the normal apps you could download from the Apple Store.
There were apps he had never heard of like iElf, Extendable Ear, and MaraudersMap (What is a MaraudersMap?). So Jack decided to use the Extendable Ear app to see what it would do. Then he pointed it towards a group of people across the street and was amazed with the results. He was able to hear the people across the street as if he were right next to them. The group of people were talking about One Direction and Justin Beiber so he lost interest and decided to test it out on another person. Jack pointed the phone to a girl across the street and heard the girl talking about him.
He was kind of surprised and looked at the girl. Then he noticed that the girl was kind of cute and he actually knew her. So he decided to go over and talk to the girl. It turns out that the girl did like him and he got her number before he went back home. Then he wondered what the LovePotion app would do. So out of curiosity he clicked on it and he was surprised at what he could do with the app. He had just scratched the surface with what he could do with the new phone he had found.
How much would you sell the iPhonus for if you had it? If I had the iPhonus for sale, I would sell it for what it’s worth, maybe about $300. I would sell it for this amount because besides being very similar to an iPhone, it also has everything you want on it , so others will like it because they'll have access to the Internet when they need it or they can download fun games!
In sells, I would tell people that if they got the iPhonus, their lives would be easier and more fun! Road signs everywhere would say “Feel happy now I have an iPhhonous!” or “This phone will change your whole Life Only with the iPhonus!” People would be lining up outside Walmart doors. Anybody who is willing to risk it just to have a phone like this one needs to get the new gig out their.
Some will say “I'm broke, but I really want this phone; however, I’m getting a payment plan for the iPhonus!” Competition will be held all the time people trying to compete against one another others will be saying I'm going to win everybody trying to get the new phone. It's worth a try so how about it. I guarantee you'll like it.
A girl, Jocelyn, had just got out of school; she was walking home with one of her friends,Jasmine. As Jasmine made a turn on her block, Jocelyn turned her head while waving good bye. Obviously, Jocelyn wasn't paying attention to where she was walking into, and tripped over a medium size rock. She got up right away and saw she dropped her phone, she thought. Hence, she picked it up. Something on her phone seemed different, but she thought it was just caused she fell and hit her head. She kept walking home with one of her hand rubbing the side of her head. Once she got home, she decided to lay down and check her facebook. When she turned her phone on, she saw multiple apps that she had never use, nor heard of. Jocelyn had, finally, noticed she got someone else’s phone. She explorer through thing on the phone to get clues to try to find out whose phone this was. Because she couldn’t find anything, she just started to play with it. She found all these apps so fun. She started seeing the differences between her phone and this new phone. After comparing, she notice that they’re kinda the same. Except the new phone had more GB, and it was much bigger. Now, she prefers this new phone,thus, she kept it. She started downloading all her favorite apps and started taking many pictures.
I liked how your post has a different outcome, you choose a different route then way everyone else would choose. You post differs from mines because Jocelyn ends up liking and keeping the phone. Your post made me view the topic of the post differently, because again your post has a different outcome. Andrianna Mickey P3 Ms. Wright
I would sell this IPhonus fro around $124 because there are some things in that phone that you can only get from the movie Harry Potter. Like the app !Elf is only found on that phone its also tells you specific things such as what is happening wherever you are and it will also help you. This is Harry Potter’s stuff that he using throughout his life. He used these things in battles, school, and even the sport he plays.
I would advertise this as the only phone you will need; so you can help yourself throughout your life. I would also put it on tv and explain all the amazing things you can do if you buy this phone. Put it on billboards, however, where everyone could see it. But most people won’t be able to buy this phone because they don’t have the money to purchase it. Once someone buys the phone, they would show it to their friends and describe what it does and how it works. If they did that they would want the phone because it is a trend that is going on.
Another way to advertise the new IPhonus is to put it on tv shows that most people would watch. That is the easiest way because mostly adults and teenagers watch television that advertises all different sorts of things. Many of them would just watch the certain things on tv. Instead of putting the IPhonus with the commercials we should put them into the tv show where they actually pay attention to what they are watching. -Jacqueline Romero A3
I can relate to your response by on how this phone can change peoples lives just by using one app from it and on how if you ever decided to sell it. Then it better be worth the cost that your going to get from it. -Crystal Coronel A/B2
One app that I would keep is the TimeTurn. Cause then you could go back in time, and relive the memories you want to go back to. Also, to change the bad things that I've done in my past. I would try to fix the relationship that I had with a family member, and if I did have the app we wouldn't be mad at each other no more. I would also want that app so I could change the choice in which high school I went too. I would've picked Kelly High School. Rules a school would have to make for a student that has this phone is that you cant use the Remember all to remember the answers to a test and cheat. You can't use the Love Potion to make every boy/girl in the school to like you, so you can seem popular. Cause it doesn't work like that. Other than that they could use the other apps for anything during school. I would sell this phone for like a million or more because it does so much. Like the TimeTurn you can go back and fix everything you did wrong. The Love Potion you can make that guy/girl you really like to fall in love with you. (which i really dont think will work on most but whatever) I would advertise it as an auction, so people can like get their phone at a price thats good for them and for me, since I would be the one getting the money.
It was dark and the trees where dancing. It was are first night at the camp site and my little cousins wanted to play hide and seek. so i agreed to be it and when i was finally done counting i went off to go look for them. I thought i hard one laughing behind a tree and so i i turned around quick and ran to that tree and then tripping over something on the floor which had bring me down to the floor. I felled pretty hard and it hurt a lot, when i started to look up i seen this bright light and i heard a vibration.
I reached my arm out to grab it and when i it was in my hand it felt so powerful and different. I then heard my name being called out and put the phone right into my pocket . For some reason it felt like i had to keep the phone safe and that if anyone found it or took it away from me something bad will happen. It end up being my mom who was calling me, she started asking a lot of questions like where was i, why did i take so long and all of this other stuff i didnt pay attention to.
I walked really fast to get to the camp site and when i did i went in my tent and i started going threw the phone it was so weird and different, different meaning in a good way. there were so much on there that was so special. I loved it at that moment but then the phone started vibrating again and i got scared. My mom heard it and asked what do i have in my hand i told her and she said i have to give it back the its right person. I was sad but did in the morning.
Abrianna and her mom, father and brother went to a new restaurant Rave and Rusters, which it included food and games too. They were having so much fun; however, they got into some trouble. Some big trouble which could have lead them to jail. While at Rave and Ruster's Abrianna and her family went around to the entire restaurant and played every since game; but, they’re was one family who caught Abrianna’s attention. They were so loud and energetic, smiling at each other while playing the games. “ Hellooo!” “ Earth to Abrianna”, said her mother. After Abri’ got out of a daze she never paid the family any attention. But, that’s when the trouble began. Abri’ and her family decide to roam around the restaurant alone. Abri’ had spotted a big black Iphonus . She hurried and found her family to tell them what she’ve found. Her mom told her to turn it into security; but, her father took it and said to just keep it. So she obeyed. They went to go eat after playing the games for hours, and Abri’ see’s a girl and security walking back and forth searching, so she said, “ I think they’re looking for the Phonus.” Which was true, they were. This was the girl from the family Abrianna was staring at earlier. The girl who iPhouns it was had a tracker on it and when she walking passed Abi’ and her family it started to buzz of an alarm. Her father tried to hurry and throw the iphonus across the table from them; but they girl heard it and said,” That’s MY iPhouns.” and she snatched it . The owner of Rave and Ruster came over to the family table and told them they had to leave, but Abri’s mom told him,” I don’t like how you didn’t question us, you just came over and told us to get out” “ We were going to return the her Phonus when we were done eating!” The owner then apologized and said they could stay; however, Abri’s mom wasn’t up for it. Andrianna Mickey Ms. Wright Pd. 3
One day Brody and his friends were going to the mall to get the new Iponus, but when they got there they were all sold out. “ Man I really want that new Iponus” said Brody “ Yea I did too I even wore this stupid shirt for 4 days” said Billy Bob (Brody’s friend.) The shirt said I hate Iphones but I love Iponus. Brody thought the shirt was a little odd too, but he didn’t care Brody just thought it was a phase. Billy Bob told Brody he had to get home before his overdramatic mom came looking for him. Brody said okay and they both left the mall.
When Brody got home he was ever upset about not getting the new Iponus. Brody thought the only way he could be happy talking a nice long hot shower. When got out the shower he say something on his bed that shocked him. “ I can’t believe it’s the new Iponus” yelled Brody. “My parents must have brought this for me” said Brody. When Brody went down stairs to thanks his parents they said that they leave that on his bed. Brody was so confused he didn’t know who brought him the new Iponus.
The next day Brody went to school and Billy Bob and Mob ( Brody’s other friend) what had happen. They all didn’t know what was going on, But then brought thought the only person who could have did this. Brody said it’s my sister. Billy bob and Mob both looked at Brody and said “ But your sister is dead”. To be continued………. - Kelicia Daniel P3
One day Brody and his friends were going to the mall to get the new Iponus, but when they got there they were all sold out. “ Man I really want that new Iponus” said Brody “ Yea I did too I even wore this stupid shirt for 4 days” said Billy Bob (Brody’s friend.) The shirt said I hate Iphones but I love Iponus. Brody thought the shirt was a little odd too, but he didn’t care Brody just thought it was a phase. Billy Bob told Brody he had to get home before his overdramatic mom came looking for him. Brody said okay and they both left the mall.
When Brody got home he was ever upset about not getting the new Iponus. Brody thought the only way he could be happy talking a nice long hot shower. When got out the shower he say something on his bed that shocked him. “ I can’t believe it’s the new Iponus” yelled Brody. “My parents must have brought this for me” said Brody. When Brody went down stairs to thanks his parents they said that they did not leave that on his bed. Brody was so confused he didn’t know who brought him the new Iponus.
The next day Brody went to school and Billy Bob and Mob ( Brody’s other friend) what had happen. They all didn’t know what was going on, But then brought thought the only person who could have did this. Brody said it’s my sister. Billy bob and Mob both looked at Brody and said “ But your sister is dead”. To be continued………. - Kelicia Daniel P3
I liked how your blog contained a mystery theme to it; you made it interesting to read. You post differs from mines, because you talked about how the iPhonus was unanimously put in Brody's bed. However, the names were kind of confusing, because of their similarities. Your post makes me think of a new topic because of the "To be continued", it makes me wonder. Andrianna Mickey Ms.Wright P3
i like how you gave this story a script , as well as how it transition smoothly. I really enjoyed the surprising twist that had made the story come to a "to be continued". Tyra Williams A/B3 Ms. Wright
D'low found a iphonus and he thought he was global now that he had the phone. D'low had already made his mind up that he wasn't going to return the phone because he didn't feel like buying him one. D'low plans get messed up when kemo tell him he should give the owner their phone back.. D'low told kemo no because you want me to return the phone because you didn't find it.So kemo and D'low was going back and forward about the phone.
Lil trav and lil ceno walked in the house and ask what was going on and why were they yelling. D'low told them what had happen and why they was yelling at each other. Lil ceno said so y'all doing all this over a phone really I thought someone got killed or some and y'all fools mad over a phone that's not even yours. Lil trav had told D'low let him see the phone.
The three of them told him he should just give it back and buy him one. Then the phone started ringing and it was the owner husband calling. D'low answered and told the husband where to meet him at for the phone. When they met up the husband was thanking D'low for returning the phone. At the end of the day D'low was happy he did the right thing.
In the past years of this boy named Lucius he believed in magic, it was the years when there were humans known as muggles who didn't think magic was real. But Lucius did because he has been feeling things that takes happiness out of him, he keeps seeing a bright stag every night, he sees an owl carrying a mail, he sees weird creatures with long ears, and he sometimes see people disappear. Lucius told his friends about it, but they laughed at him. They told him that magic was not real. But they were wrong. One day, Lucius found an item that changed his life, the country, and the world.
It was a day after school at little Whinging street, down the sidewalk where he sees kid playing, parks that is full of laughter, it was a peaceful afternoon. He came across his enemy who picks on him because Lucius believed in magic. Gordon picked on him, joked about magic, and punched him in the face, then ditched him. Lucius's day was ruined and went home with bruises. Lucius told his parents about what happened and why. He said that magic was real, but his parents disagreed and he argued with them. He told them the things he seen, what he felt. But his mom shut him up with a slap on the cheek. This made Lucius upset, so he took a walk to the forest in the dark. This was his biggest mistake because he feels a really cold climate and he feels that all the happiness was out of him. Then he came across a phone.
This was no ordinary phone because clearly it says Iphonus. He sees weird apps and it all makes sense to him. the extendable ears, elfs, white stags, mail owls, it made sense. He felt something floated behind him. He saw a cloaked ghost known as dementors. It was coming close until the phone shot out a white stag that drove it away. Lucius was so shocked, he now can prove his friends, the world that there are wizards, witches, and magic in this world. The news spread, people believed in magic. Lucius kept the Iphonus for himself. It was the best item he got in his entire life. - Rogelio Aguirre P3
Dear Rogelio Aguirre i really like how you gave your opinion on how you feel and stating how you believe in magic as well as comparing and interacting the the reader, that was one of the main things that stuck out to me the most as i read your post.
I really like how you expressed the feelings of magic he had experienced with the phone that really made this interesting. Khristin Williams Ms. Wright A3.B3
If i where to have the iPhonus i would most likely sell it for $160-180. Why? well because there are only so many out there that are made. With the apps that are on it, Extendable ear,ielf, hallow, love potion and many more. it is nothing else that has been seen on and ordinary phone nor are any of them able to be down loaded! This device has been in the movies of harry potter and it only so much that can be given or bought off of the set of a huge movie. The way i would advertise this phone i would place many adds on tv, my commercials be shown during times where teen and younger children are up watching tv to grab their attention as well as, i would make an add that would make them want to beg their parents to allow them to have one. Also i would create billboards so it would be seen where ever people go. Others ways i would try to let the public know about the new iPhonus i would team up with other very popular industries who can get the word out there much faster than me doing it by myself. To make the phone look wanted; i would study the life of children to see what is it that makes kids want thinks, what goes off in there brain that makes them think that they just have to have it, but this phone would not only be to the use of kids but to adults as well this is what will and can be wanted by every one off all different ages. Soon this phone will be the world's main iphonus.
Dear Tyra I agree I would also sell the phone because it's so unique and theres only so many in the world and others need to see the beauty of the phone too. Khristin Williams Ms.Wright A3,B3
One day Elena was taking a walk through the woods with her friend Johnny. He had to get home on time or else his mom would be mad. Elena walked home and on the ground she found a phone and it looked like a familiar phone but it was an iphonus. It had these weird named apps and she clicked on the apps and each time she clicked on an app, things happened. Things no one could understand.
Elena decided to take the phone home with her. Elena was lying in bed and she remembered about the phone. She decided to click on an app and she turned invisible. She didn't know how to return back to her regular self, she was stuck walking around invisible for days. Then, she found a book that had and it was called phonus. It reminded her of the phone, so she decided to read it an in the book it showed each app on the phone and in order to be able to return to the real world, you had to say a spell. Elena found the spell for the invisiblity. She said the strange words with the book in her hand and then she was herself again. In the book it expalined that the apps could lead to a secret world where you could fly, have powers, have battles, all these magical things.
A couple days later Elena decided to tell Johnny about the phone. It took some time convincing him but later they took turns with the apps. It was Elena's turn to pick the app she wanted to travel to. Johnny was waiting and waitng for her. But Elena never returned, she was stuck in the app. Forever.
The iPhonus is an extraordinary phone that allow people to use magic rather than actual electricity. It cause less than the iPhone, it helps conserve electricity, and it has a very long battery life. The apps of the phone are also unique; the Accio app can summon inanimate objects instantly, the Wizard Chess app is an addictive game that use magic chess pieces to win. However, schools may have a problem in handling with students possessing the iPhonus. To help schools, there are some rules that can be made for schools.
For one rule, students should not be able to use the Stupify app. The Stupify app can stun people instantly for a certain amount of time. This can be used for bad purposes such as immobilizing a teacher or student on purpose. The Accio app should only be used for summoning school items. Students can use the Accio app to summon not only inanimate objects, but also a few living things, though they are mostly harmless, such as worms or beetles. However, the app can be used for pranking purposes, so the Accio app should only be used for school items. Lastly, the OwlMail app should never be used during school. The OwlMail app goes slower than email, but the messages are private- only the people responding to each other can see them. The OwlMail will keep students from doing school work and instead talk to their friends, so the OwlMail app should never be allowed to be used during school.
The iPhonus is not only a breath-taking piece of hardware, but it can be used for sinister purposes. The students may use the iPhonus as it should be used. This is why rules for the use of the iPhonus must be made- the iPhonus can be devastating to the school, so caution must be taken when anyone is found with the iPhonus.
I like how you show how you used your iPhonus and how you found out how dangerous the phone really is. I also pointed out how dangerous the iPhonus is, but it was for schools and not everyday life.
- How would your life change with this in your pocket? My life would never ever be the same. It may change in a bad way but can also be in a good way. I wouldn’t need to wait for my parents to go get me, have interesting perks to entertain myself, and I probably will get beaten up a lot. I wouldn’t have to worry about half the things I need to. With the phone, I’ll have more than one power yet more danger over my head to worry about.
Some apps are good and others are going to cause me trouble. The love potion is going to make my life impossible with so many people squirming around me asking for help or asking for a date on valentines day. Wizard Chess is going to keep me entertained, not sure if there is any good outcomes with that. Reparo .. Not sure. Time Turner is so going to get me more time on sleep. Extendable Ear .. Lets say I will never use that app around dangerous people. I’m not sure what the other apps do since I can’t remember the movies or books. In the end, the phone will be very beneficial for me in good and bad ways. Having a phone that can help me on magic is awesome. Yet, I still don’t know what half of the apps do. Even if I did, I would still use it or have it. Either way, the phone can make my life a living adventure, filled with dangers and so on. Sounds like a lot of fun.
There was this girl, her birthday was in two days. She had told her parents she wanted something magical for her birthday present. She was so excited that's all she thought about. She wondered what her parents would get her, but she had no clue as to what she was going to receive that day. All she did was annoy them about it.
The big day finally came, she rushed to all the presents and asked if she could open them. Her parents said no because they want to take pictures with her and her cake. The girl called her close friends over so she could open the present as soon as possible. She ran upstairs to get changed because she was still in her pajamas. It was 5' o'clock p.m, her parents finally said yeah go ahead and open your present after all the pictures were taken. As she opened the present with a big wide smile on her face she noticed it was an iPhonus.
She didn't expect that at all. Her parents said they had bought it an a garage sale, and they had no idea what the iPhonus did or does. The girl wasn't excited at all because she didn't know what it was nor how to use it. She took it to school the next day and everybody was all over her for the phone. She wondered why, so she asked one of her friends. Her friend said its a very magical and special phone. She didn't believe her so she did some research on the phone and the type of apps the phone had. She soon realized she has something very powerful in her hand. From that day forward her life had changed dramatically. Priscilla Acosta P3
Well if I had a iphonus it would change the way my life is. I would have access to things I never had before. I would feel powerful and in control of everything. All the app on this device can do things no one and no other device could do. To start off, the time app can be turned which means more sleeping time. There's a map to get around places, there's a love potion which can attract guys towards me. There is also so much more entertainment for me if I ever am really bored. It has so many things on it that can make me feel like I'm the boss. This device includes apps that no one else has ever seen which makes it so interesting. Although It may seem cool, it can also be dangerous for me. The device can cause me trouble, especially if I wasn't the real owner of this device. It can change the way I use and cherish life. I'd have to be very careful with it! -Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
Dear Mr.potter i know this might be a little late but,this is your birthday present.its an iwand;this device we be your wand and your cell phone. it has apps for spells and summoning creatures and other things in the app store. This is a way for us wizard to evolve and hide ourselves from mortals.we can do many things with this wonderful devices that will make life easy for us wizards so that us wizards won't have to work as hard as we have been for centuries. this phone seed up the processes of us creating spells. we want have to search all around the woods for ingredients to the spells,instead we can search on your phone for the spell and it pops up,then press the bottom and the spell will activate. this lets us wizards move quickly in case of an emergency to make everything better. this is the quality of this new device that the most elite wizards have created. this one was created to fit you specially. We made just like the wound that you have now. So happy birthday harry.
If I had this IPhonus for a day I would do so much; for example, I would play so many games on it and just show it off everywhere I go. I would let anyone see my phone because it is so high tech and so advanced. I would be on the phone all day and probably never get any sleep because of it. I would tell everyone that they need to get one of these phones just because it's so up to date and is really unique.
If I had this phone for a day I would always tell everyone this is the best phone in the world and no other phone is better. I would try and buy the phone so I can keep it forever. I’d walk up to people I don’t know and try to make people go and buy the phone. I would never lose this phone. Because, the phone is so high tech, so pretty, and has so many cool apps I would have so much fun with the phone.
I would let some people see the phone just so they can get the experience of how fun the phone is; therefore, they would want to buy the phone and want to show it to other people so they can buy it to. I would never let the phone out of my sight, I would always keep it by my side so I can see if anyone tries to take it, I’ll see what they do. This phone would become my best friend and I would start to love Harry Potter more. This phone will become my everything in that one day.
Once upon a time, it was long cold, boring day, for Nick. So he started to go through the boxes in the attic, out of boredom. Then after opening a couple of boxes, he finds a strange phone that Nick has never seen before. He turned it on and finds all these cool apps on it. Nick starts to like this phone and he becomes curious on why it was up there in the attic. And how long was it up their for? Nick wanted to tell other people about his discovery of the IPhonus, but then was afraid that no one would believe him or that they would try to take it away from him.So Nick kept the phone to himself even though he wanted to tell other people. nick had discovered several different apps on the phone that he liked to use a lot.
The apps are extendable ear, and time turn He liked these apps, and didn't want to lose them because the extendable ear made him hear things that he couldn't of heard before such as things from long distances. And for the time turn it can change time to go ahead a back to the previous. Nicks life has changed by using these apps by it made his life easier because if he starts his homework late or wanted the day to be over with he could just use the app turn time. And for the extendable ear he could hear things that he couldn't hear before such as if other people are talking about him and such.
If Nick ever decides to sell the IPhonus, he would sell it for a high cost because the apps on the phone isn’t like any other phone ever made. And this phone can change peoples lives by making it fun and easier, to do things. And I don’t think no one would want to get rid of a phone like this because its unique and no one has it, so that's what makes it fun to have.
One app that I would keep, if I were to only pick one app is the Marauders Map. The marauders map is a map that locates all the hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry.It shows you where every hallway, classroom is in the school.It an also locate specific people and it could identify them.I choose this app because maybe I can get lost in this very big school, and I can use this app to locate my teachers,classrooms and my friends. This app will be more useful than all the other apps from the phone in looking for certain places ,looking for specific people and much more.
Another app that I would keep is the Accio which can search for you anything you want such as information about a person, place or thing.I can search information for maybe a project that I would have to do for school. I think that this app is the most useful app than the other ones because it can locate for you a specific address, place, or something else.
The last app that I would choose is the wizard chess. I chose this app so that when I get bored i can use this app to play with someone else. This app is the best app for games which is why I chose it. Andres Barajas Class:A2/B2
Dear Reader,
ReplyDeleteThere once was a young teenage girl walking through the streets, she had just came from hanging out with her friends. It was late at night the moon had already come out and the cars were on there way home. All the lights from the homes were out, and all you could see was the blue lighting from their TV screens. As the young girl approached to the corner of her house she seen a green light, she wondered and walked towards it when she turned it over she saw it was a phone. She took it and walked home, then went straight into her room.
The girl had never seen that type of bran of a phone the bran said iphonous... It was similar to what she had an iphone, but it was very different. She looked at it and pressed the extended ear, and when she clicked that a ear popped out of the screen of the phone. She didn’t know what it was for until she poked the ear, and out came a strange voice a language she has never heard before. It sounded like a voice mail because after the strange languages it gave a phone number. Then she clicked on the app that said wizard chess, which sounded like chess then the game took her inside the phone so she can play herself the game.
This phone in a way was very different nothing like the iphone she had. This phone actually took her into the world she clicked in, or the app she choose. The girl was very terrified because she never experienced with these types of phones. So she decided the best thing was to take it back, she didn’t want to see the phone because she was too scared to try any other apps. So the next morning the young teenage girl put the phone back and walked to school. When the girl walked home she seen it was gone, she wondered who took it but she was glad it was gone!
Sincerely,
Blanca Cruces A2/B2
Dear writer I like the way how you made a comparison on how it would look like an Iphone but much different from when turning it on. Also on how it has a much different reaction than a regular phone and how it is unique -Victor Figueroa
DeleteI like this post, but who is scared of phones in the modern world?! Jesus christ, was she a time traveler?
DeleteDamaris Carrasco P2
I really like your post because so apps do cause teems to lose their mind. their are some type of phones out their that aren't all that good like people say they are.
DeleteTashianna Cannon A/B 3
Dear writer
Deletei like your post you used great details and made me feel like i was in with the girl watching every step she went.
Sarah Muro
Ms.wright
A/B3
Dear Writer,
DeleteI admire the way you have writen your story. It has a good description of what the charcter in your story does and what she thinks. I also have to admire how you gave details on the scene and story.
Helen Hernandez
A2/B2
I was on my way to school with some friends when from afar I saw something glistening on the ground. I thought it was just glass, so I didn’t really pay much attention to it. I asked my friend if he could see what it actually was, but he said he didn’t know. We walked a few more steps and I could now see what it actually was. It was an Iphonus. These are really expensive phones, and hard to find at a cheap price. Who could have possibly dropped an Iphonus?
ReplyDeleteI asked my friends what they thought I should do with the phone. They said I should obviously keep it. I thought it would be wrong for me to keep the phone because if I were to lose my phone, I’d expect for the one who found it to return it. But, I just decided to keep it. I went through the phone like for an hour straight. It had many cool and fun apps to play and use.
I went on one of the apps and I started messing around with it. I saw that the names of the apps were familiar. Like from a movie of some sort. And then it hit me, they were names from spells in the Harry Potter series. But, why would they have these apps in their phones? Can it be that this is Harry Potter’s phone? I feel lucky to have found this phone. Before this, I had a really old flip phone, that was so embarrassing to pull out when I had to call someone
Jose Herrera A2/B2
I like how you compare your story to Harry Potter movies and how the phone can also relate to them.
Delete-Crystal Coronel A/B2
Dear reader if i ever had the iphonus what u would do with it is sell it,and if i sold it i would make a lot of money because it has all these kinds of apps.These apps are mostly magical because they are mostly about magic.The phone will be worth 100,000,000,000,000 Dollars.It would be worth alot because the iphonus is not just a regular phone,or a smart phone or any kind of phone,but it is a magical phone.
ReplyDeleteI would advertise the phone by making a fun commercial. Since the phone would be pretty big, i would need to have some kind of celebrity advertise it in a way people would be interested in. Also, i would have it with me all the time that way it wouldn’t be stolen from me and have to live without my money.If a person buys the iphonus they will first go to the wizard chess.The game the wizard chess would be more of a fun game to play because the chess will become real and they would be in the game.
If the buyer wants to bargain for it for a lower price. I would say no because the Iphonus would be too special to be sold for a lower price. The phone,Which is black, will have a case the it fits any phone if placed on. The phone will have a personal friend that you will be able to talk to. It is a creature that can teleport through black smoke ,and be able to help you in a late situation. This creature will surely never disobey you because the phone has a button that you can press so it would not get out of control,so not only the phone will be great it would be useful,helpful,and fun to play with.
Victor Figueroa
Ms.wright
Period 2
I like this post, but can ANYONE even afford it?
DeleteDamaris Carrasco P2
I agree with your representation of the iPhonus and its price. The reason why is because the iPhonus is very precious, and it must be sold to whoever desperately needs it. Since the phone is very magical and would require someone with good care to handle the phone, since it may be dangerous as well. I like your idea of the advert and the game the owner would play because that would be appealing as well.
Delete-Javier Pena, Period 2
Dear Reader
DeleteI like your post as well but dont you think thats a lot of money? i hope its as good as you say it is if any one is going to try to buy it
Sarah Muro
Ms.wright
A/B3
I like that you said you would have a fun commerical and how you describe your strategies for advertising it.
DeleteLianna Cortes
Period 2
Although that is a lot of money you are asking for, I strongly agree with it being very worthy. It has many apps that are very magical. No other device is magical which makes this one special.
Delete-Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
The rules that the school would have is to download any apps that you need for school if it was for textbook or to communicate with the teacher. In order to have a iPhonus you would have to be in a magic school because only witches and wizards have the power to control an iPhonus. If not enroll to a magic school you would have to take a test and see if you would be taken in. If you are not a wizard or a witch then the child that want to learn magic would need to talk to the principal and say they wanted to enrol.
ReplyDeleteIf you plan on getting and iPhonus you have to take it to each class because teacher would check if you have the right materials. If you do not have it then the teachers would count you as you where absent because you do not have your materials. Also when you are in that class in the school year they would tell you to delete the apps and only keep the ones that are not school related. When they come back from break they would tell you what you need to download on your iPhonus. If you had a problem over break or in school they would tell you to bring it into the main office to get a replaceable one until yours is fixs. If you do not follow the rules then they would take away and give it to you till the end of class.
If the teacher gets your iPhonus they would provide you with a textbook and give it to you at the end of class so you would do it again. Also, if you continue on to do it then they will tell you do not ever bring it their class if they do they should not turn it on. The student would have to buy a textbook for that class in order to continue their studies throughout that class period. If none of these rules are followed in the school they would get put into a different school. That school does not have an iPhonus and the school that would makes you buy all the textbook and materials you need. Some materials will be provide and some will not be provide by the school.
-Kassandra E. Munoz
A2/B2
I like this because it's probably true, they make us do everything for school.
DeleteDamaris Carrasco P2
I like this story because it sound so true and realize to me and this could really happen in school to us - Kelicia Daniel P3
DeleteI love your story it sounds like a good deal and I do realize it happens in real life all the time.
DeleteTashianna Cannon
A/B 3
I like the way that you describe what the apps do. Also I really liked the story because we could use these apps everyday instead of doing it ourselves
Delete-Jacqueline Romero A3
Dear Writer,
DeleteWe both share the same topic of story. We both share the pirks we can get with the phone, its disadvantages and even its issues.
Helen Hernandez
DeleteA2/B2
If I had this iphoneus for one day I would be extremely lost and curious. Lost because I wouldn't know what each of the apps mean, what they can do, and who the owner was. Curious because it has all these unusual apps like hallows, love potion, and wizard chess. Now, I’m really curious on what the phone would do if I clicked on one of the apps. Do you think it would kill me, turn me into a monster, or explode? Lets find out because who knows what this phone can lead to.
ReplyDeleteI invited my friend Alexi over so we can discover this new iphoneus together. The first app we clicked was Felix Felicis. Felix Felicis means “Liquid Luck” and we definitely needed that for our few months of freshman year because we need to go to sophomore year. It was weird making the potion for it because you needed honey,rose petal,clover ( 3 leaf or 4 doesn't matter), basil,stir 3 times, then let sit for 3 minutes then it is done. And your potion will be ready, so we waited for that amount of time till it was complete.
I WAS AMAZED! We checked our powerschool and notice we were at a 4.0 Gpa. We even got accepted to go to a certain college for ROTC for a week. Now, the problem is what will happen when the phone is gone? Will we be at the bottom line? Will we make it in fitness? Those things worried me. So, I decided to write down the ingredients just incase without bothering to look at the side effects of what could happen if you used it too much.
Mariah Martinez
Ms.Wright
Period A/B2
I would also be curios because I do not know what each app does or what will happen. I also liked how you said that it Felix Felicis means "Liquid Luck" I wish we had that kind of thing it would be amazing.
DeleteKassandra Munoz
A2/B2
If I were to be in the same setting as the iPhonus, out of all the apps that can be chosen I would choose to keep TimeTurn. The reason for this is because this app looks the most intriguing to me. Since I can guess that the TimeTurn app probably changes or alters time in some way. Which is why this app would be the most helpful for anyone and myself including because of its time abilities it holds. The time can be changed at any moment to go backward or forward at any setting for myself.
ReplyDeleteThe apps, along with TimeTurn, I would also keep would be Expandable Ear because of the ability to expand someone's hearing aid and then they can hear far distances. Which is why the Expandable Ear would be very handy in any case for myself. For example, If I have to hear a conversation or a secret being told that is somewhat a long distance away.Then I would help others with things they need or things that must be done with the new found apps I have on iPhonus to to aid me. The TimeTurn can help me change time while the Expandable Ear can provide me with new information faster in the end.
That is why in most cases these two will come hand in hand to provide faster and easier solutions to problems I may have. In school, home, outside, shopping; any setting will give these two apps meaning to their uses. These solutions, however, might not always be the best; they can only sometimes help when I have them, which is why I will make sure not to lose the iPhonus. The Expandable Ear and the TimeTurn will only aid to a certain degree, although, that is why I must use the apps carefully. In conclusion the two apps I would choose would be TimeTurn and Expandable Ear for their very helpful abilities.
-Javier Pena Period 2
I really liked your writing! I liked how you explained all of the things the app would be able to do. I also liked how you added the things you would do with these apps.
Delete-Vanessa Arellano A3/B3
I definitely agree with your choices I would keep the TimeTurn app because it would most likely do something that would help me with time situations. Also i agree withe the Extendable Ear app because it would be awesome to hear things from a far distance.
DeleteAngel Robles
Ms. Wright
P3
I like how you included a lot of detail which makes your response strong. The apps seem very useful to me as well. I would also agree with you having to be careful with the phone especially since your not that very familiar with the apps.
Delete-Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
How much would you sell the iPhonus for if you had it? How would you advertise it?
ReplyDeleteIf I had the iPhonus for sale, I would sell it for what it’s worth, maybe about $200-$290. I would sell it for this amount because besides being very similar to an iPhone, it also has magical powers, so people can cast spells on others and feel like a real wizard!
In advertisements, I would tell people that if they got the iPhonus, their lives would be easier and more exciting! Billboards everywhere would say “Feel like a wizard!” or “Cast a spell today! Only with the iPhonus!” People would be lining up outside ATT’s doors. Anybody who is somebody will have the iPhonus.
People will say “I don’t have any money; nevertheless, I’m getting a payment plan for the iPhonus!” Contests would be held about the books and movies of Harry Potter and whoever knew the most would win the phone. Everyone and their grandmother would have an iPhonus!
Damaris Carrasco P2
I like how you said that their is a contest that you can win and iPhonus by entering a contest. I like how you said that the one that enters more ballets would get the iPhonus.
Delete-Kassandra Munoz
A2/B2
I like how you put so much energy into you blog and if you was to talk to me about Iphonus then i might just bought the phone. - Kelicia Daniel P3
DeleteI really liked the way you would advertise the phone. I think that would really get people to buy it.
Delete-Vanessa Arellano A3/B3
I really like what you would put on the billboards. I would want to but it if I saw a billboard like that and I think other people would too.
DeleteIsabel Arteaga Wright P3
Jimmy was walking when he saw a nice looking phone on the floor, so he picked it up and he went home with it right away. when he got home he didn't know what to do with it, so he decided to turn it on and he noticed that this wasnt no ordinary phone because he saw apps that he never seen or heard of, so he decided to use the blue reparo app so that he could fix the tires on his ferrari because they were losing their grip.
ReplyDeleteThe other apps that i see on this phone are really cool because i think the blue timeturn app could really be cool and really helpful if you might want to go back in time and fix something that you felt was wrong. If i had this phone for one day i would lose my mind and do anything i want because of the time turn app, this app could allow me to go back in time and fix what ever i had done. this phone is kind of similar to harry potter because he has wizard powers and they are mostly like the ones on the phone. if i got to keep an app i would keep the time turn because i could basically do what i want and not get caught.
My life would be way different if i had this phone because its a really powerful thing to have and you could basically do what ever you want. i would sell this phone for a billion dollars because its worth lots of money and its really powerful. a school rule would be to not use in school because it would really be crazy because the phone is so powerful. my question for this phone is can it break? i say no because the phone is so powerful i don't think it would break.-Brandon Camarillo
I agree that this phone is really powerful. I also agree with the fact that you can use the time turn app to do whatever you want and not get caught, just imagining of the things I would do is truly amazing.
DeleteJohann Garcia
P3
Ms. Wright
I think this would be a great phone because you gave great details on what the apps do. I can see how the phone would work if I would use it.
DeleteJeremiah Williamson A2/B2
Ms. Wright
It was her fifteenth birthday. The moment where she becomes a young adult was finally here. She had her mother invite family and friends all the way to her little village just so they can sing to her. It was a crazy morning, people from all over the village knew that it was the girls birthday because it was so small. She had her mother and father cook her meals, but the day still wasn’t perfect. The girl was raised to be a brat. She got everything she wanted and didn’t have to work for anyone. She would rather go out and play in the mud, then go to school to take a math test. She was always finding something new, and everyone would think she is amazing and a smart young lady. The thing is, she wasn’t girly. She would fight her mother just to wear pants.
ReplyDeleteThe girls mother gave her everything and set up the party. Everyone was at their house just for her, but the girl thought her day still wasn’t perfect. The girl then ran off to this forest where she would go sit and think about her life, and what it means to live with such a person like her. As she was running she stumbled upon this phone. It wasn’t a regular phone either, not like the one her mother had and not like the one she had. She noticed that it said “I” but she didn’t she the phone part, like it said on her phone. It said “Iphonus” She wondered if she should just leave it because someone was probably looking for it, or if this was a great opportunity to explore.
The girl picked up the phone and pressed the Extendable Ear. She noticed that the phone took some time because it said that it was trying to get to know her. She wondered if someone was trying to play a trick on her, or if this was the real thing. Then she noticed that she could her her mother all the way from the forest. When the girl opened her camera on her Iphone she saw that her ear was really big. She was scared, yet interested in the fact that this is real. She ran home and keep the phone.
Alexi De Jesus
A/B2
Your story was really fun to read. It makes me want to read more of the girl and the phone. You had great grammar. I like how you made the girl seem non girly. I wonder, why didn't the girl think her day was still not perfect Still, you did a good job with this story.
DeleteStephanie Alcocer
Ms.Wright A/B 3
I like many of the things in your story, such as the third person perspective and the girl's personality. I also like how you express how she felt about the iPhonus and how she used it.
DeleteTyler Wilkerson Ms.Wright A3/B3
What would you do with this phone if you had it for one day?
ReplyDeleteI would do tons of things with it. The first one being trying to figure it out and knowing how to navigate the phone. I don’t think it would be that hard to use it; besides, it kind of seems like an iPhone. I would go through the phone to see what kinds of things it does. It would be kind of interesting trying to see what the phone does, considering I know nothing about Harry Potter.
After I learned how to use it, I would try to figure out what all of the apps do. It would be really fun but dangerous trying to figure out what the apps do. Overall, I think it would be a great experience because I would learn about things that maybe Harry Potter fans know. It would be pretty awesome knowing what magical power each app comes with.
However, if I don’t figure out how to use the iPhonus, things would get pretty ugly. Because I wouldn’t know how to use the phone, beams of light would be shooting everywhere. Magic would be getting all over the place. If I don’t figure out how to use the phone, people would be getting hit with the love potion spell. If I did find the iPhonus, things could go bad or good.
-Vanessa Arellano
Ms. Wright A3/B3
I like the fact that you added different aspects of having the phone and having to learn to use the phone. The other thing i liked was how you mentioned the ups and downs of having the magical phone.
DeleteAngel Robles
Ms. Wright
P3
I like how you said that you wouldn't be able to know how it works and that it would be dangerous cause you don't know how to use it. Also I like how you explained the bad part of having the phone.
DeleteIsabel Arteaga Wright P3
I like how you added imagination to your answer. It made the phone sound really fun with all the powers each app will have. Also I like how you added both the positive and negative things that would happen if you got the phone.
DeleteStephanie Alcocer
Ms.Wright A/B3
I like how you show how you used your iPhonus and how you found out how dangerous the phone really is. I also pointed out how dangerous the iPhonus is, but it was for schools and not everyday life.
DeleteTyler Wilkerson Ms.Wright A3/B3
It was a normal day for Jack until he found something unusual on the floor on him way home from school. From the looks of it he thought it was an iPhone or an apple product. It didn't have a password, so he was able to get into the phone without struggle. When he slid his finger to unlock the phone he was surprised with what he saw on the phone. They were apps, but not the normal apps you could download from the Apple Store.
ReplyDeleteThere were apps he had never heard of like iElf, Extendable Ear, and MaraudersMap (What is a MaraudersMap?). So Jack decided to use the Extendable Ear app to see what it would do. Then he pointed it towards a group of people across the street and was amazed with the results. He was able to hear the people across the street as if he were right next to them. The group of people were talking about One Direction and Justin Beiber so he lost interest and decided to test it out on another person. Jack pointed the phone to a girl across the street and heard the girl talking about him.
He was kind of surprised and looked at the girl. Then he noticed that the girl was kind of cute and he actually knew her. So he decided to go over and talk to the girl. It turns out that the girl did like him and he got her number before he went back home. Then he wondered what the LovePotion app would do. So out of curiosity he clicked on it and he was surprised at what he could do with the app. He had just scratched the surface with what he could do with the new phone he had found.
Angel Robles
Ms. Wright
P3
How much would you sell the iPhonus for if you had it? If I had the iPhonus for sale, I would sell it for what it’s worth, maybe about $300. I would sell it for this amount because besides being very similar to an iPhone, it also has everything you want on it , so others will like it because they'll have access to the Internet when they need it or they can download fun games!
ReplyDeleteIn sells, I would tell people that if they got the iPhonus, their lives would be easier and more fun! Road signs everywhere would say “Feel happy now I have an iPhhonous!” or “This phone will change your whole Life Only with the iPhonus!” People would be lining up outside Walmart doors. Anybody who is willing to risk it just to have a phone like this one needs to get the new gig out their.
Some will say “I'm broke, but I really want this phone; however, I’m getting a payment plan for the iPhonus!” Competition will be held all the time people trying to compete against one another others will be saying I'm going to win everybody trying to get the new phone. It's worth a try so how about it. I guarantee you'll like it.
Tashianna Cannon
A/B3 Ms. Wright
I like what you said about how great the phone is and you also describe the phone
Delete-Jacqueline RomeroA3
A girl, Jocelyn, had just got out of school; she was walking home with one of her friends,Jasmine. As Jasmine made a turn on her block, Jocelyn turned her head while waving good bye. Obviously, Jocelyn wasn't paying attention to where she was walking into, and tripped over a medium size rock. She got up right away and saw she dropped her phone, she thought. Hence, she picked it up.
ReplyDeleteSomething on her phone seemed different, but she thought it was just caused she fell and hit her head. She kept walking home with one of her hand rubbing the side of her head. Once she got home, she decided to lay down and check her facebook. When she turned her phone on, she saw multiple apps that she had never use, nor heard of. Jocelyn had, finally, noticed she got someone else’s phone. She explorer through thing on the phone to get clues to try to find out whose phone this was.
Because she couldn’t find anything, she just started to play with it. She found all these apps so fun. She started seeing the differences between her phone and this new phone. After comparing, she notice that they’re kinda the same. Except the new phone had more GB, and it was much bigger. Now, she prefers this new phone,thus, she kept it. She started downloading all her favorite apps and started taking many pictures.
Stephanie Alcocer
MS.Wright A/B3
I liked how your post has a different outcome, you choose a different route then way everyone else would choose. You post differs from mines because Jocelyn ends up liking and keeping the phone. Your post made me view the topic of the post differently, because again your post has a different outcome.
DeleteAndrianna Mickey P3
Ms. Wright
I would sell this IPhonus fro around $124 because there are some things in that phone that you can only get from the movie Harry Potter. Like the app !Elf is only found on that phone its also tells you specific things such as what is happening wherever you are and it will also help you. This is Harry Potter’s stuff that he using throughout his life. He used these things in battles, school, and even the sport he plays.
ReplyDeleteI would advertise this as the only phone you will need; so you can help yourself throughout your life. I would also put it on tv and explain all the amazing things you can do if you buy this phone. Put it on billboards, however, where everyone could see it. But most people won’t be able to buy this phone because they don’t have the money to purchase it. Once someone buys the phone, they would show it to their friends and describe what it does and how it works. If they did that they would want the phone because it is a trend that is going on.
Another way to advertise the new IPhonus is to put it on tv shows that most people would watch. That is the easiest way because mostly adults and teenagers watch television that advertises all different sorts of things. Many of them would just watch the certain things on tv. Instead of putting the IPhonus with the commercials we should put them into the tv show where they actually pay attention to what they are watching.
-Jacqueline Romero A3
I can relate to your response by on how this phone can change peoples lives just by using one app from it and on how if you ever decided to sell it. Then it better be worth the cost that your going to get from it.
Delete-Crystal Coronel A/B2
One app that I would keep is the TimeTurn. Cause then you could go back in time, and relive the memories you want to go back to. Also, to change the bad things that I've done in my past. I would try to fix the relationship that I had with a family member, and if I did have the app we wouldn't be mad at each other no more. I would also want that app so I could change the choice in which high school I went too. I would've picked Kelly High School.
ReplyDeleteRules a school would have to make for a student that has this phone is that you cant use the Remember all to remember the answers to a test and cheat. You can't use the Love Potion to make every boy/girl in the school to like you, so you can seem popular. Cause it doesn't work like that. Other than that they could use the other apps for anything during school.
I would sell this phone for like a million or more because it does so much. Like the TimeTurn you can go back and fix everything you did wrong. The Love Potion you can make that guy/girl you really like to fall in love with you. (which i really dont think will work on most but whatever) I would advertise it as an auction, so people can like get their phone at a price thats good for them and for me, since I would be the one getting the money.
Isabel Arteaga P3 Wright
Dear Reader
ReplyDeleteIt was dark and the trees where dancing. It was are first night at the camp site and my little cousins wanted to play hide and seek. so i agreed to be it and when i was finally done counting i went off to go look for them. I thought i hard one laughing behind a tree and so i i turned around quick and ran to that tree and then tripping over something on the floor which had bring me down to the floor. I felled pretty hard and it hurt a lot, when i started to look up i seen this bright light and i heard a vibration.
I reached my arm out to grab it and when i it was in my hand it felt so powerful and different. I then heard my name being called out and put the phone right into my pocket . For some reason it felt like i had to keep the phone safe and that if anyone found it or took it away from me something bad will happen. It end up being my mom who was calling me, she started asking a lot of questions like where was i, why did i take so long and all of this other stuff i didnt pay attention to.
I walked really fast to get to the camp site and when i did i went in my tent and i started going threw the phone it was so weird and different, different meaning in a good way. there were so much on there that was so special. I loved it at that moment but then the phone started vibrating again and i got scared. My mom heard it and asked what do i have in my hand i told her and she said i have to give it back the its right person. I was sad but did in the morning.
Sarah Muro
Ms.Wright 'A/B3
I like how you start off the story kind of suspenseful, and i like how youn decribed that the phone felt powerful and different
DeleteLianna Cortes
Period 2
Abrianna and her mom, father and brother went to a new restaurant Rave and Rusters, which it included food and games too. They were having so much fun; however, they got into some trouble. Some big trouble which could have lead them to jail.
ReplyDeleteWhile at Rave and Ruster's Abrianna and her family went around to the entire restaurant and played every since game; but, they’re was one family who caught Abrianna’s attention. They were so loud and energetic, smiling at each other while playing the games. “ Hellooo!” “ Earth to Abrianna”, said her mother. After Abri’ got out of a daze she never paid the family any attention. But, that’s when the trouble began. Abri’ and her family decide to roam around the restaurant alone. Abri’ had spotted a big black Iphonus . She hurried and found her family to tell them what she’ve found.
Her mom told her to turn it into security; but, her father took it and said to just keep it. So she obeyed. They went to go eat after playing the games for hours, and Abri’ see’s a girl and security walking back and forth searching, so she said, “ I think they’re looking for the Phonus.” Which was true, they were. This was the girl from the family Abrianna was staring at earlier. The girl who iPhouns it was had a tracker on it and when she walking passed Abi’ and her family it started to buzz of an alarm. Her father tried to hurry and throw the iphonus across the table from them; but they girl heard it and said,” That’s MY iPhouns.” and she snatched it . The owner of Rave and Ruster came over to the family table and told them they had to leave, but Abri’s mom told him,” I don’t like how you didn’t question us, you just came over and told us to get out” “ We were going to return the her Phonus when we were done eating!” The owner then apologized and said they could stay; however, Abri’s mom wasn’t up for it.
Andrianna Mickey
Ms. Wright Pd. 3
I liked the story, but I had a question who did the phone belong too and who did the character give it too?
ReplyDeleteAngel Robles
Ms. Wright
P3
One day Brody and his friends were going to the mall to get the new Iponus, but when they got there they were all sold out. “ Man I really want that new Iponus” said Brody “ Yea I did too I even wore this stupid shirt for 4 days” said Billy Bob (Brody’s friend.) The shirt said I hate Iphones but I love Iponus. Brody thought the shirt was a little odd too, but he didn’t care Brody just thought it was a phase. Billy Bob told Brody he had to get home before his overdramatic mom came looking for him. Brody said okay and they both left the mall.
ReplyDeleteWhen Brody got home he was ever upset about not getting the new Iponus. Brody thought the only way he could be happy talking a nice long hot shower. When got out the shower he say something on his bed that shocked him. “ I can’t believe it’s the new Iponus” yelled Brody. “My parents must have brought this for me” said Brody. When Brody went down stairs to thanks his parents they said that they leave that on his bed. Brody was so confused he didn’t know who brought him the new Iponus.
The next day Brody went to school and Billy Bob and Mob ( Brody’s other friend) what had happen. They all didn’t know what was going on, But then brought thought the only person who could have did this. Brody said it’s my sister. Billy bob and Mob both looked at Brody and said “ But your sister is dead”. To be continued………. - Kelicia Daniel P3
One day Brody and his friends were going to the mall to get the new Iponus, but when they got there they were all sold out. “ Man I really want that new Iponus” said Brody “ Yea I did too I even wore this stupid shirt for 4 days” said Billy Bob (Brody’s friend.) The shirt said I hate Iphones but I love Iponus. Brody thought the shirt was a little odd too, but he didn’t care Brody just thought it was a phase. Billy Bob told Brody he had to get home before his overdramatic mom came looking for him. Brody said okay and they both left the mall.
ReplyDeleteWhen Brody got home he was ever upset about not getting the new Iponus. Brody thought the only way he could be happy talking a nice long hot shower. When got out the shower he say something on his bed that shocked him. “ I can’t believe it’s the new Iponus” yelled Brody. “My parents must have brought this for me” said Brody. When Brody went down stairs to thanks his parents they said that they did not leave that on his bed. Brody was so confused he didn’t know who brought him the new Iponus.
The next day Brody went to school and Billy Bob and Mob ( Brody’s other friend) what had happen. They all didn’t know what was going on, But then brought thought the only person who could have did this. Brody said it’s my sister. Billy bob and Mob both looked at Brody and said “ But your sister is dead”. To be continued………. - Kelicia Daniel P3
I liked how your blog contained a mystery theme to it; you made it interesting to read. You post differs from mines, because you talked about how the iPhonus was unanimously put in Brody's bed. However, the names were kind of confusing, because of their similarities. Your post makes me think of a new topic because of the "To be continued", it makes me wonder.
DeleteAndrianna Mickey
Ms.Wright P3
i like how you gave this story a script , as well as how it transition smoothly. I really enjoyed the surprising twist that had made the story come to a "to be continued".
DeleteTyra Williams
A/B3
Ms. Wright
Dear reader,
ReplyDeleteD'low found a iphonus and he thought he was global now that he had the phone. D'low had already made his mind up that he wasn't going to return the phone because he didn't feel like buying him one. D'low plans get messed up when kemo tell him he should give the owner their phone back.. D'low told kemo no because you want me to return the phone because you didn't find it.So kemo and D'low was going back and forward about the phone.
Lil trav and lil ceno walked in the house and ask what was going on and why were they yelling. D'low told them what had happen and why they was yelling at each other. Lil ceno said so y'all doing all this over a phone really I thought someone got killed or some and y'all fools mad over a phone that's not even yours. Lil trav had told D'low let him see the phone.
The three of them told him he should just give it back and buy him one. Then the phone started ringing and it was the owner husband calling. D'low answered and told the husband where to meet him at for the phone. When they met up the husband was thanking D'low for returning the phone. At the end of the day D'low was happy he did the right thing.
Cedric Mitchell A3/B3
In the past years of this boy named Lucius he believed in magic, it was the years when there were humans known as muggles who didn't think magic was real. But Lucius did because he has been feeling things that takes happiness out of him, he keeps seeing a bright stag every night, he sees an owl carrying a mail, he sees weird creatures with long ears, and he sometimes see people disappear. Lucius told his friends about it, but they laughed at him. They told him that magic was not real. But they were wrong. One day, Lucius found an item that changed his life, the country, and the world.
ReplyDeleteIt was a day after school at little Whinging street, down the sidewalk where he sees kid playing, parks that is full of laughter, it was a peaceful afternoon. He came across his enemy who picks on him because Lucius believed in magic. Gordon picked on him, joked about magic, and punched him in the face, then ditched him. Lucius's day was ruined and went home with bruises. Lucius told his parents about what happened and why. He said that magic was real, but his parents disagreed and he argued with them. He told them the things he seen, what he felt. But his mom shut him up with a slap on the cheek. This made Lucius upset, so he took a walk to the forest in the dark. This was his biggest mistake because he feels a really cold climate and he feels that all the happiness was out of him. Then he came across a phone.
This was no ordinary phone because clearly it says Iphonus. He sees weird apps and it all makes sense to him. the extendable ears, elfs, white stags, mail owls, it made sense. He felt something floated behind him. He saw a cloaked ghost known as dementors. It was coming close until the phone shot out a white stag that drove it away. Lucius was so shocked, he now can prove his friends, the world that there are wizards, witches, and magic in this world. The news spread, people believed in magic. Lucius kept the Iphonus for himself. It was the best item he got in his entire life.
- Rogelio Aguirre P3
Dear Rogelio Aguirre
Deletei really like how you gave your opinion on how you feel and stating how you believe in magic as well as comparing and interacting the the reader, that was one of the main things that stuck out to me the most as i read your post.
Tyra Williams
A/B3
Ms.Wright
I really like how you expressed the feelings of magic he had experienced with the phone that really made this interesting.
DeleteKhristin Williams
Ms. Wright
A3.B3
Dear Reader,
ReplyDeleteIf i where to have the iPhonus i would most likely sell it for $160-180. Why? well because there are only so many out there that are made. With the apps that are on it, Extendable ear,ielf, hallow, love potion and many more. it is nothing else that has been seen on and ordinary phone nor are any of them able to be down loaded! This device has been in the movies of harry potter and it only so much that can be given or bought off of the set of a huge movie.
The way i would advertise this phone i would place many adds on tv, my commercials be shown during times where teen and younger children are up watching tv to grab their attention as well as, i would make an add that would make them want to beg their parents to allow them to have one. Also i would create billboards so it would be seen where ever people go.
Others ways i would try to let the public know about the new iPhonus i would team up with other very popular industries who can get the word out there much faster than me doing it by myself. To make the phone look wanted; i would study the life of children to see what is it that makes kids want thinks, what goes off in there brain that makes them think that they just have to have it, but this phone would not only be to the use of kids but to adults as well this is what will and can be wanted by every one off all different ages. Soon this phone will be the world's main iphonus.
Tyra Williams
A/B3
Ms.Wright
Dear Tyra I agree I would also sell the phone because it's so unique and theres only so many in the world and others need to see the beauty of the phone too.
DeleteKhristin Williams
Ms.Wright
A3,B3
Dear Reader,
ReplyDeleteOne day Elena was taking a walk through the woods with her friend Johnny. He had to get home on time or else his mom would be mad. Elena walked home and on the ground she found a phone and it looked like a familiar phone but it was an iphonus. It had these weird named apps and she clicked on the apps and each time she clicked on an app, things happened. Things no one could understand.
Elena decided to take the phone home with her. Elena was lying in bed and she remembered about the phone. She decided to click on an app and she turned invisible. She didn't know how to return back to her regular self, she was stuck walking around invisible for days. Then, she found a book that had and it was called phonus. It reminded her of the phone, so she decided to read it an in the book it showed each app on the phone and in order to be able to return to the real world, you had to say a spell. Elena found the spell for the invisiblity. She said the strange words with the book in her hand and then she was herself again. In the book it expalined that the apps could lead to a secret world where you could fly, have powers, have battles, all these magical things.
A couple days later Elena decided to tell Johnny about the phone. It took some time convincing him but later they took turns with the apps. It was Elena's turn to pick the app she wanted to travel to. Johnny was waiting and waitng for her. But Elena never returned, she was stuck in the app. Forever.
Lianna Cortes
Wright
Period 2
Tyler Wilkerson Ms. Wright A3/B3
ReplyDeleteThe iPhonus is an extraordinary phone that allow people to use magic rather than actual electricity. It cause less than the iPhone, it helps conserve electricity, and it has a very long battery life. The apps of the phone are also unique; the Accio app can summon inanimate objects instantly, the Wizard Chess app is an addictive game that use magic chess pieces to win. However, schools may have a problem in handling with students possessing the iPhonus.
To help schools, there are some rules that can be made for schools.
For one rule, students should not be able to use the Stupify app. The Stupify app can stun people instantly for a certain amount of time. This can be used for bad purposes such as immobilizing a teacher or student on purpose. The Accio app should only be used for summoning school items. Students can use the Accio app to summon not only inanimate objects, but also a few living things, though they are mostly harmless, such as worms or beetles. However, the app can be used for pranking purposes, so the Accio app should only be used for school items. Lastly, the OwlMail app should never be used during school. The OwlMail app goes slower than email, but the messages are private- only the people responding to each other can see them. The OwlMail will keep students from doing school work and instead talk to their friends, so the OwlMail app should never be allowed to be used during school.
The iPhonus is not only a breath-taking piece of hardware, but it can be used for sinister purposes. The students may use the iPhonus as it should be used. This is why rules for the use of the iPhonus must be made- the iPhonus can be devastating to the school, so caution must be taken when anyone is found with the iPhonus.
I like who you talk about the apps and how they work.
DeleteJeremiah Williamson A2/B2
I like how you show how you used your iPhonus and how you found out how dangerous the phone really is. I also pointed out how dangerous the iPhonus is, but it was for schools and not everyday life.
ReplyDeleteTyler Wilkerson Ms.Wright A3/B3
- How would your life change with this in your pocket?
ReplyDeleteMy life would never ever be the same. It may change in a bad way but can also be in a good way. I wouldn’t need to wait for my parents to go get me, have interesting perks to entertain myself, and I probably will get beaten up a lot. I wouldn’t have to worry about half the things I need to. With the phone, I’ll have more than one power yet more danger over my head to worry about.
Some apps are good and others are going to cause me trouble. The love potion is going to make my life impossible with so many people squirming around me asking for help or asking for a date on valentines day. Wizard Chess is going to keep me entertained, not sure if there is any good outcomes with that. Reparo .. Not sure. Time Turner is so going to get me more time on sleep. Extendable Ear .. Lets say I will never use that app around dangerous people. I’m not sure what the other apps do since I can’t remember the movies or books.
In the end, the phone will be very beneficial for me in good and bad ways. Having a phone that can help me on magic is awesome. Yet, I still don’t know what half of the apps do. Even if I did, I would still use it or have it. Either way, the phone can make my life a living adventure, filled with dangers and so on. Sounds like a lot of fun.
Helen Hernandez
A2/B2
There was this girl, her birthday was in two days. She had told her parents she wanted something magical for her birthday present. She was so excited that's all she thought about. She wondered what her parents would get her, but she had no clue as to what she was going to receive that day. All she did was annoy them about it.
ReplyDeleteThe big day finally came, she rushed to all the presents and asked if she could open them. Her parents said no because they want to take pictures with her and her cake. The girl called her close friends over so she could open the present as soon as possible. She ran upstairs to get changed because she was still in her pajamas. It was 5' o'clock p.m, her parents finally said yeah go ahead and open your present after all the pictures were taken. As she opened the present with a big wide smile on her face she noticed it was an iPhonus.
She didn't expect that at all. Her parents said they had bought it an a garage sale, and they had no idea what the iPhonus did or does. The girl wasn't excited at all because she didn't know what it was nor how to use it. She took it to school the next day and everybody was all over her for the phone. She wondered why, so she asked one of her friends. Her friend said its a very magical and special phone. She didn't believe her so she did some research on the phone and the type of apps the phone had. She soon realized she has something very powerful in her hand. From that day forward her life had changed dramatically.
Priscilla Acosta P3
Well if I had a iphonus it would change the way my life is. I would have access to things I never had before. I would feel powerful and in control of everything. All the app on this device can do things no one and no other device could do.
ReplyDeleteTo start off, the time app can be turned which means more sleeping time. There's a map to get around places, there's a love potion which can attract guys towards me. There is also so much more entertainment for me if I ever am really bored. It has so many things on it that can make me feel like I'm the boss. This device includes apps that no one else has ever seen which makes it so interesting.
Although It may seem cool, it can also be dangerous for me. The device can cause me trouble, especially if I wasn't the real owner of this device. It can change the way I use and cherish life. I'd have to be very careful with it!
-Tiffany Pancoalt A/B 3
Dear
ReplyDeleteMr.potter i know this might be a little late but,this is your birthday present.its an iwand;this device we be your wand and your cell phone. it has apps for spells and summoning creatures and other things in the app store. This is a way for us wizard to evolve and hide ourselves from mortals.we can do many things with this wonderful devices that will make life easy for us wizards so that us wizards won't have to work as hard as we have been for centuries.
this phone seed up the processes of us creating spells. we want have to search all around the woods for ingredients to the spells,instead we can search on your phone for the spell and it pops up,then press the bottom and the spell will activate. this lets us wizards move quickly in case of an emergency to make everything better.
this is the quality of this new device that the most elite wizards have created. this one was created to fit you specially. We made just like the wound that you have now. So happy birthday harry.
If I had this IPhonus for a day I would do so much; for example, I would play so many games on it and just show it off everywhere I go. I would let anyone see my phone because it is so high tech and so advanced. I would be on the phone all day and probably never get any sleep because of it. I would tell everyone that they need to get one of these phones just because it's so up to date and is really unique.
ReplyDeleteIf I had this phone for a day I would always tell everyone this is the best phone in the world and no other phone is better. I would try and buy the phone so I can keep it forever. I’d walk up to people I don’t know and try to make people go and buy the phone. I would never lose this phone. Because, the phone is so high tech, so pretty, and has so many cool apps I would have so much fun with the phone.
I would let some people see the phone just so they can get the experience of how fun the phone is; therefore, they would want to buy the phone and want to show it to other people so they can buy it to. I would never let the phone out of my sight, I would always keep it by my side so I can see if anyone tries to take it, I’ll see what they do. This phone would become my best friend and I would start to love Harry Potter more. This phone will become my everything in that one day.
Khristin Williams
DeleteMs. Wright
A3,B3
Dear Reader,
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time, it was long cold, boring day, for Nick. So he started to go through the boxes in the attic, out of boredom. Then after opening a couple of boxes, he finds a strange phone that Nick has never seen before. He turned it on and finds all these cool apps on it. Nick starts to like this phone and he becomes curious on why it was up there in the attic. And how long was it up their for? Nick wanted to tell other people about his discovery of the IPhonus, but then was afraid that no one would believe him or that they would try to take it away from him.So Nick kept the phone to himself even though he wanted to tell other people. nick had discovered several different apps on the phone that he liked to use a lot.
The apps are extendable ear, and time turn He liked these apps, and didn't want to lose them because the extendable ear made him hear things that he couldn't of heard before such as things from long distances. And for the time turn it can change time to go ahead a back to the previous. Nicks life has changed by using these apps by it made his life easier because if he starts his homework late or wanted the day to be over with he could just use the app turn time. And for the extendable ear he could hear things that he couldn't hear before such as if other people are talking about him and such.
If Nick ever decides to sell the IPhonus, he would sell it for a high cost because the apps on the phone isn’t like any other phone ever made. And this phone can change peoples lives by making it fun and easier, to do things. And I don’t think no one would want to get rid of a phone like this because its unique and no one has it, so that's what makes it fun to have.
-Crystal Coronel A/B2
One app that I would keep, if I were to only pick one app is the Marauders Map. The marauders map is a map that locates all the hogwarts school of witchcraft and wizardry.It shows you where every hallway, classroom is in the school.It an also locate specific people and it could identify them.I choose this app because maybe I can get lost in this very big school, and I can use this app to locate my teachers,classrooms and my friends. This app will be more useful than all the other apps from the phone in looking for certain places ,looking for specific people and much more.
ReplyDeleteAnother app that I would keep is the Accio which can search for you anything you want such as information about a person, place or thing.I can search information for maybe a project that I would have to do for school. I think that this app is the most useful app than the other ones because it can locate for you a specific address, place, or something else.
The last app that I would choose is the wizard chess. I chose this app so that when I get bored i can use this app to play with someone else. This app is the best app for games which is why I chose it.
Andres Barajas
Class:A2/B2